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"I never would have thought that a girl would be good at this," BEN mumbled, tossing a handful of popcorn into his mouth. He cast a sideways glance to the young female beside him, who was staring at the TV screen with a triumphant look. "I mean, we got up to round 47," he continued. "I usually can't even get past 10."

[Your Name] turned her head and smiled happily at him. "I really like games like this," she giggled. "I've always found them really fun!"

"So have I," he commented. "And you know... We would have survived if you had just came over and revived me when I was down--"

The young girl frowned. "It's not my fault if you die every ten seconds and there's a huge-ass swarm of zombies behind me."

"Ten seconds?" BEN repeated. "I do believe that I survive longer than that."

"BEN."

"What?"

"You died in the first round."

"IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT I LIKE TO DIVE DOWN STAIRCASES. IT WASN'T MY FAULT THAT THERE WAS LIKE FIVE OF THEM ZOMBIES WAITING FOR ME EITHER."

"It was rather amusing to watch," she smiled. "Though you didn't have to start throwing grenades in every corner of the map..."

"They were driving me crazy woman! So I set em' all ON FIRE!"

"Don't make me laugh. The only thing you killed was yourself when the grenade bounced of the wall. Idiot."

The boy and the girl continued to bicker about BEN's ability to play the game for a good ten minutes, before a loud and abrupt knock came to the door, startling them out of their bickering. The tunic-clad male looked towards his bedroom door, his eyes narrowed. "Hey, [Your Name]? What time is it?"

[Your Name] turned her head towards the clock, giving him the reading. "About ten PM."

"Then who the Hell is knocking on my door at this time?"

The knock sounded again, this time louder than the last. Sighing, BEN stood up, making his way towards the wooden door. He pulled it open, his demonic red eyes falling upon the familiar sight of Jeff the Killer. "What can I do for you?" BEN raised an eyebrow, only to be interrupted by the black haired murderer.

"Move outta the way, pixie-ears," Jeff shoved him lightly, strolling into the room. "Yo~ [Your Name]?"

Said girl looked up to him, her [wolf ear colour] canine ears twitching above her head and her tail swishing behind her. "What can I do for you?"

"You're coming with me," he stated, holding his hand out to help her out of his seat. "Slender wants to introduce you to someone."

~Time Skip because I'm a lazy ass~

[Your Name] hid behind Jeff as the small party of Jeff, BEN and herself entered the living room. BEN casually strode past the two, his hands stuffed into his pockets. Jeff on the other hand was trying to keep himself from laugh at the young girl behind him. "He's not that bad," he mumbled.

"But he's a clown," [Your Name] shot back. "Clowns are creepy."

"Well, I agree with you on that one. But I swear he's not--"

"Child," the voice of Slender Man cut him of. The tall being placed a hand on the half wolf's shoulder, his other pale fingers pointing in another direction. She followed where he was pointing, her eyes falling upon a tall man. He was clad in black and white striped clothes, and he had large tufts of what seemed to be feathers over his shoulder. His hair was a messy, jet black and his eyes looked to be an icy blue. He looked like a clown alright, but not the average 'bright colours and lots of laughs' type of clown.

"This is Laughing Jack," Slender Man stated.

[Your Name] came out from her hiding place behind Jeff, pleased to find that he was not the type of clown that she despised so much. "Hi," she smiled happily. "My name is [Your Name]."

The male released a loud laugh, before sauntering over to the young girl. "I left this house a couple of months ago," he started, his body swaying from side to side. "But then I get a message from good ol' Slendy, telling me that there's a new girl in town~ So what do I do? I come over here and give you the best hospitality you've ever seen~"

"Uhm... What--?"

"Would you like some candy, [Your Name]? Or do you want to play some carnival games~?"

"I think I'll pass on both," she laughed uneasily.

"Oh, what a shame," he sighed. "But nevertheless, my room is right next to yours~"

"Jack," Slender Man pinched the bridge of where his nose would be. "You're scaring the poor child."

"My bad," he giggled. "I apologize little miss [Your Name]~"

"It's okay..."

"Great news!" He suddenly piped up. "I'm going to stay here for a while~"

"Do you have to?" Slender Man asked, sighing. "It's already hard enough to deal with everyone without you around..."

"Slendy!" Jack gasped. "How could you!? I am very much hurt and ashamed of you!"

"Jack. I would apologize if you weren't grinning like an idiot. See? I know how much you know that I'm telling the truth."

"Oh, how you wound me!"

"L.J. Shut up."

"No~"

"Shut up or I will make you shut up."

"Can't make me Slendy~"

"Don't make me come after you Jack."

"OOOOH~ Getting mad, are we? Heeheheheh~"

"That's it--"

"WILL YOU FREAKING WATCH WHERE YOU'RE PUTTING THOSE DAMN TENDRILS!? YOU'RE GOING TO HIT ME, YOU ASSHAT," Jeff interrupted.

I freaking updated. Y'all better appreciate this - FIRERAGE - 

I have no more inspiration for this story. Damn, I feel bad because I can't update often because I have no ideas at all.
Anyway, as you can see, I finally updated. YAY~Love Clap :happybounce: 
It might take a while for the next chappie... Please bear with me...

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EDIT: THIS IS DISCONTINUED. NO MORE CHAPTERS WILL BE POSTED. SORRY GUYS.

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:iconjumpingbunn:
JumpingBunn Featured By Owner 18 hours ago  New member
NOOO why why is it always me every time I read a fanfic I get to a good and then I see those same words "sorry discontinued" WHYYYY why did you discontinue *goes in corner and cries a river*
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
ASSHAT* died of laughter*
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Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
your story is so amazing tho.......even though i posted so many comments already on this, this story is amazing. i really hope one day you could update at least 1 more chapter........*sobs in corner*
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RecklessAlbinoChibi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
If it makes you feel better, then I'll tell you that I actually planned on writing once last Creepypasta x Reader - but a oneshot. Just one final thing.
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Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
YESSSSSSSSSSSS 
OMG PLEASE DO IT OMG IM SO HAPPY NOW
(funny thing is I'm writing this at 2 in the morning lmao)
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meridafair12 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
nnnnnnnnoooooooi just got excited about Laughing Jack!!!!
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LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
Me: .... Goodbye **walks out of door with poker face**
Ben: o--o
L.J: o-o
Slenderp: o-----o
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Eriejaeger2015 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I FUCKING LOVE DIS STORY IT MADE MY OC (fnaf,creepy pasta, and dragons all in one)
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BlackDeathRosePasta Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  New member
LAUGHING JACK!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Artist
WHAT!?!?!?!?!? HOW... HOW...!
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ArtrianaSilver Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dude I can help you get inspiration. Music is the most helpful way of inspiration. Your story inspired my creepypasta oc.
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TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Professional Artist
Oh and btw, what's ur OC?
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:iconartrianasilver:
ArtrianaSilver Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My creepypasta oc is a Pure Wolfian Warrior. I actually uploaded 4 chapters of her story. You should read them they are good stories. Plus there is more coming.
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TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Professional Artist
My OC is a creepypasta OC, a furry OC, and a fnaf OC all together. *EPIC MUSIC COMES ON* the power of mashup. *shades come on*
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ArtrianaSilver Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD :p
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:iconvalerie--winchester:
Valerie--Winchester Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
if it's okay with you could I continue it plz if not then thats fine too
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:iconthelovestorygal:
TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Professional Artist
Hey I'm continuingcontinuing
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:iconvalerie--winchester:
Valerie--Winchester Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
We can collab if you want or we can have separate Ideas IDK. Whatever floats your boat, iguess. 
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:iconthelovestorygal:
TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Professional Artist
Can we collaborate?
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:iconvalerie--winchester:
Valerie--Winchester Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sure of course we can. It's just up to you if you want to collab or not
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TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Professional Artist
Kk let's collaborate u do next chapter. Send me a message when ur done.Kermityayplz 
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Valerie--Winchester Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
woah woah woaaaaahhh hold your horse's baby (not offending just how i call people sorry it's a habit, a horrible one if i may add) we have to work together ok so lets collab on what should happen in the next chapter
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TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Professional Artist
Happy Neko Aww. Uh maybe reader can hang out with jeff in the next chapter, they can go on a killing spree or training with Slenderman.
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RecklessAlbinoChibi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
If you'd like, then sure.
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Valerie--Winchester Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much you wont regret it
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:iconthelovestorygal:
TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Professional Artist
+RecklessAlbinoChibi 

Can I continue this? Just tell me what would happen int the next part, and I'll upload it for you.
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RecklessAlbinoChibi Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Sure. If you'd like to continue it, go ahead c: 
Though I don't have any ideas for the next part or any other parts, for that matter. I think I've just totally forgotten everything about this series; I've put it behind me and plan to never look at it ever again.
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TheLoveStoryGal Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Professional Artist
Party Hard! PARTY HARD Party Hard Maknae Line Yayayayayayayayay
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RecklessAlbinoChibi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Have fun with it :3
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TheVentusK Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
:iconsigh: and it was getting to the good part.
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TheVentusK Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
:iconsighplz:
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TheVentusK Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
-.-; ugh i am not good with these icons plz
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TheVentusK Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
:iconsighingplz:
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:icontheventusk:
TheVentusK Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
There we go
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Moarrrrrr!!! la in love 
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wolfbite157107 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Student General Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaggggh what no chp whyyyyyyy
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Firestar0406 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
9 MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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Heiscool1234 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014
Dat ending though xD
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Meii-Mika Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
nuuuuuuuuuuu *+*
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JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
What whhyyy
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Crimsonpikachumanga Featured By Owner Edited Oct 5, 2014   General Artist
What???!!! No more chapters???!!! D: well, it was a great series of chapters that I enjoyed. Keep up the good work! Btw, if you ever have any ideas, ask for help! I asked kickass9 for ideas, and he helped me a lot!! :3
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IceCrystalTheAlicorn Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Artist
RecklessAlbinoChibi, this is an amazing story. I am quite disappointed that you won't continue. Please.. Continue once more. It would be greatly be appreciated.
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GlobalVendetta Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
When i saw no more updates i was just likeClem Epic face No Kitty Glasses Luke's Epic Face Luke turns to deviant Im Sorry Squidward Sexy Upset HojoDesperate for NoBuddy-Else 
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Crimsonpikachumanga Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014   General Artist
Well she can start a new series, right?
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GlobalVendetta Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
that would be so cool id be likeSCREAM Creepy stare elrubiusOMG: OMG excited happy I'm so happy plz XDDDD Squidward-Sexy (Sexy Time) 
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Crimsonpikachumanga Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014   General Artist
Yup
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infinitewolf Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
when she said that BEN died in the first round, my grandma was right next to me and I tried so hard to hold in my laughPikachu Piff Plz England (Laughing) [V3] 
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EasternSun Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Is depressed* Why!? D:
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loveteddylove1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
but WRITERCHAN its 2014 xD
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